Minor nitpick, this is an
analysis. Remove all bolding in the analysis as well.
Please remove mentions of Memento or Destiny Bond on the first set, replacing them with Pain Split. Dusknoir is too slow to get any proper use out of Destiny Bond, and Memento is not viable in today's metagame. Pain Split is Dusknoir's best mode of recovery.
<p>For those hardcore pokemon trainers, you can try this hardcore moveset: (Curse/Pain Split or Payback/Mean Look/Substitute w/ 252 HP/252 Def/4 SpD.)</p>
Language like this just irks the reader. This is not the language expected of an analysis which is supposed to go onsite. Please corrct the numerous other grammatical errors and language throughout this analysis.
Once again, I suggest you lurk a bit more. Read some proper analyses, battle other people, try improve your writing style, language in particular. This analysis needs a hell of a lot of improvement. Otherwise, I suggest that you pass on this analysis to someone who has better language and knowledge of the curent metagame required to write a proper analysis. I am sorry if this sounds redundant, but you definitely need to improve a lot.