I'm trying to up my Peer Edits and trying to take a lot more time on them. I talked about this set to both Fishin and Aldaron and they both approved of it. More credit to Fishin for rephrasing little pieces that I wrote to make it much more readable and presentable.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/banette
[SET]
name: Trick Room
move 1: Trick Room
move 2: Destiny Bond
move 3: Taunt
move 4: Shadow Claw / Will-o-wisp
item: Focus Sash
ability: Insomnia
nature: Brave
evs: 252 Atk
ivs: 0 HP / 0 Def / 0 SpA / 0 SpD / 0 Spe
[SET COMMENTS]
<p>The strategy behind this set is to set up Trick Room and then take down an opponent using Destiny Bond. Banette is one of only 2 Pokemon in UU that has access to both Insomnia and Trick Room, making it a perfect candidate.</p>
<p>With a Brave nature and 0 Speed IVs, Banette will hit 118 Speed, outspeeding almost any opposing Pokemon once Trick Room has been activated. Destiny Bond fits snugly into Banette's moveset, since after Trick Room is activated Banette will nearly always use it first, taking down the opponent and allowing you to switch in a new Pokemon to take advantage of Trick Room unscathed. Taunt will force any Pokemon to use an offensive move if you think the opponent might try to avoid attacking Banette directly. The last slot depends on how you plan to use Banette, offensively or defensively. If you want to use Banette as a quick suicide lead to get Trick Room up and sweep as soon as possible, Shadow Claw can prove pretty helpful for taking out any Pokemon that could possibly stop you or any Pokemon that just needs to be weakened first. However, Will-o-wisp almost seems natural in Trick Room, lowering Attack with Trick Room reversing Speed. Both are acceptable options and give Banette some way of hurting opposing Pokemon.</p>
<p>Since Banette wants as little HP as possible for Destiny Bond to activate, only Attack EVs are required. Banette also wants the slowest Speed stat possible, making a Brave nature optimal.</p>
<p>There is a different approach Banette can take with the set by ditching Destiny Bond for Knock Off and always using Will-o-wisp in the last slot. Banette can act as a defensive Pokemon easily, and almost nothing will outpace it in Trick Room. If you choose to do this, an EV spread of 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD with a Relaxed nature is recommended.</p>
Hopefully this is much better than my former Peer Edits and if there are mistakes, I will hopefully use this to push myself into writing better Peer Edits. Thanks!
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/banette
[SET]
name: Trick Room
move 1: Trick Room
move 2: Destiny Bond
move 3: Taunt
move 4: Shadow Claw / Will-o-wisp
item: Focus Sash
ability: Insomnia
nature: Brave
evs: 252 Atk
ivs: 0 HP / 0 Def / 0 SpA / 0 SpD / 0 Spe
[SET COMMENTS]
<p>The strategy behind this set is to set up Trick Room and then take down an opponent using Destiny Bond. Banette is one of only 2 Pokemon in UU that has access to both Insomnia and Trick Room, making it a perfect candidate.</p>
<p>With a Brave nature and 0 Speed IVs, Banette will hit 118 Speed, outspeeding almost any opposing Pokemon once Trick Room has been activated. Destiny Bond fits snugly into Banette's moveset, since after Trick Room is activated Banette will nearly always use it first, taking down the opponent and allowing you to switch in a new Pokemon to take advantage of Trick Room unscathed. Taunt will force any Pokemon to use an offensive move if you think the opponent might try to avoid attacking Banette directly. The last slot depends on how you plan to use Banette, offensively or defensively. If you want to use Banette as a quick suicide lead to get Trick Room up and sweep as soon as possible, Shadow Claw can prove pretty helpful for taking out any Pokemon that could possibly stop you or any Pokemon that just needs to be weakened first. However, Will-o-wisp almost seems natural in Trick Room, lowering Attack with Trick Room reversing Speed. Both are acceptable options and give Banette some way of hurting opposing Pokemon.</p>
<p>Since Banette wants as little HP as possible for Destiny Bond to activate, only Attack EVs are required. Banette also wants the slowest Speed stat possible, making a Brave nature optimal.</p>
<p>There is a different approach Banette can take with the set by ditching Destiny Bond for Knock Off and always using Will-o-wisp in the last slot. Banette can act as a defensive Pokemon easily, and almost nothing will outpace it in Trick Room. If you choose to do this, an EV spread of 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD with a Relaxed nature is recommended.</p>
Hopefully this is much better than my former Peer Edits and if there are mistakes, I will hopefully use this to push myself into writing better Peer Edits. Thanks!