PU [BW] Articuno [GP 1/1] [DONE]

Yoko

I COULD BE BANNED!
:articuno:
[OVERVIEW]
Thanks to its amazing special bulk, Articuno is very capable of walling and stalling Pokemon like Shiftry and Audino; however, it is severely hindered by its bad typing that lets prominent foes like Monferno, Zebstrika, and Rampardos break it, and its weakness to entry hazards limits it from switching in consistently. Nevertheless, with its ability, Pressure, as well as reliable recovery in Roost, Articuno can be a great defensive asset to teams if it's provided with the proper support like other defensive Pokemon which help cover its weaknesses.

[SET]
Specially Defensive (Articuno) @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Substitute
- Roost
- Ice Beam
- Toxic / Roar

[SET COMMENTS]
With maximum Special Defense, this set focuses on using Articuno's bulk to stall out the opponent's team. Substitute prevents status from crippling Articuno; and allows it to stall out threatening low-PP moves such as Head Smash, Stone Edge, and Close Combat from users like Relicanth, Torterra, and Ursaring. Ice Beam helps Articuno not be too passive, threatening an OHKO on Torterra, Jumpluff, and Gabite, as well as 2HKOs on foes like Shiftry, Maractus, Fraxure, and Marowak. Toxic can be useful to stall out most defensive Pokemon if Articuno's team does not provide Toxic Spikes support; it can also be helpful to spread Toxic in conjunction with Pokemon like Bronzor and be a good option when paired with entry hazard setters like Dwebble, Stunfisk, and Torterra. Roar is an alternative that's useful if Articuno has entry hazard support and has value in phazing setup sweepers like Shiftry, Ursaring, and Mawile. Articuno can alternatively use an EV spread with maximum Speed investment, which lets it outspeed the likes of Gabite, Monferno, and Luxray; however, this leaves it more frail.

Due to the tier's abundance of entry hazard setters that can hinder Articuno, Natu and Rapid Spin users like Tentacool are very good teammates. In return, Articuno can help wall their checks like Shiftry. Articuno's weaknesses to Fire-, Rock-, and Electric-type moves let it be broken down by Pokemon like Monferno, Rampardos, and Raichu, making other defensive Pokemon that can cover these weaknesses like Frillish, Klang, and Stunfisk appreciated. In return, Articuno can help to wall Pokemon that threaten them like Shiftry, defensive Gabite, and Golduck. Articuno appreciates Heal Bell and Wish users like Audino, which can help offset its Stealth Rock weakness.
[CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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Akir

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:articuno:
[OVERVIEW]
Thanks to its amazing base 125 Special Defense stat and a average base 90 HP stat, Articuno is very capable at being able to wall and stalling Pokemon like Shiftry and Audino, although it can be severely hindered down by its bad typing letting prominent foes like Monferno, Zebstrika, and Rampardos break it, and its weakness to entry hazards limits it from switching in consistently. However with its ability Pressure, as well as reliable recovery with Roost, Articuno can be a great defensive asset to teams if its provided with the proper support.

[SET]
Articuno @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
Happiness: 0
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Substitute
- Roost
- Ice Beam
- Toxic / Roar

[SET COMMENTS]
With maxed-out Special Defense this set focuses more on Articuno's bulk to stall out the opponent's team. Substitute prevents status from crippling Articuno and allows it to stall out super-effective low PP moves such as Head Smash, Stone Edge, and Close Combat. Roost keeps Articuno's HP high to continuously make Substitutes and it can mitigate Stealth Rock damage. Ice Beam helps Articuno not be too passive, being able to threaten a OHKO on Torterra, Jumpluff, and Gabite, as well as threatening 2HKOes on foes like Shiftry, Maractus, Fraxure, and Marowak. Toxic can be useful to stall out most defensive Pokemon if your team does not provide Toxic Spikes support, however its also a good option when paired with Toxic Spikes users like Tentacool and entry hazard users like Dwebble, Stunfisk, and Torterra. Roar can also be used if you do have Toxic Spikes support or if you value phazing and preventing set-up more

Due to the tier's abundance of hazard setters which can hinder Articuno Pokemon like Natu and Rapid Spin users like Tentacool are very good teammates. Articuno's weakness to Fire- and Electric-type moves let it be broken down, making other defensive Pokemon like Frillish, Pelipper, Stunfisk, and Whiscash appreciated. dont forget covering the rock weakness, and add a line about pokemon that articuno helps in return, and wish/heal bell support that articuno also loves

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Yokoisop, 617542]]
- Quality checked by: [[Akir, 231726]], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
Good overall, mainly just needs a bit more detail and a few added parts too. 1/2 after all of that
 

Bella

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QC 2.
:articuno:
[OVERVIEW]
Thanks to its amazing base 125 Special Defense stat and average base 90 HP stat, Articuno is very capable at being able to wall and stalling Pokemon like Shiftry and Audino, although its severly hindered down by its bad typing letting promient foes like Monferno, Zebstrika, and Rampardos break it, and its weakness to entry hazards limits it from switching in consistently. However with its ability, Pressure, as well as reliable recovery with Roost, Articuno can be a great defensive asset to teams if its provided with the proper support.

[SET]
Articuno @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
Happiness: 0
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Substitute
- Roost
- Ice Beam
- Toxic / Roar

[SET COMMENTS]
With maxed-out Special Defense this set focuses more on Articuno's bulk to stall out the opponent's team. Substitute prevents status from crippling Articuno and allows it to stall out super-effective low PP moves such as Head Smash, Stone Edge, and Close Combat give examples of what mons use these moves Arti stalls. Roost keeps Articuno's HP high to continuously make Substitutes and it can mitigate Stealth Rock damage. Ice Beam helps Articuno not be too passive, being able to threaten a OHKO on Torterra, Jumpluff, and Gabite, as well as threatening 2HKOes on foes like Shiftray, Maractus, Fraxure, and Marowak. Toxic can be useful to stall out most defensive Pokemon if ur your team does not provide Toxic Spikes support mention Toxic here from stuff like Bronzor here too., however its also a good option when paired with Toxic Spikes users like Tentacool and entry hazard users like Dwebble, Stunfisk, and Torterra. Roar is an alternative thats useful if you already have Toxic Spikes support or entry hazards in general, or value preventing set up sweepers like Shiftry, Ursaring, and Mawile. put a mention here for max Speed as an EV spread here here, its helpful to outrun the likes of Gabite, Monferno, Lux, etc but means you are a much more frail SpD wall.

Due to the tier's abundance of hazard setters which can hinder Articuno Pokemon like Natu and Rapid Spin users like Tentacool are very good teammates mention what Articuno does back for them here. Articuno's weakness to Fire-, Rock-, and Electric-type moves let it be broken down, making other defensive Pokemon like Frillish, Klang, and Stunfisk appreciated. In return, Articuno can help to wall Pokemon that threaten them like Shiftry, defensive Gabite, and Golduck. Due to not having any form of recovery, you have roost lmao. Articuno can appreciate Heal Bell and Wish users like Audino which can also help offset its Stealth Rock weakness.
[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Yokoisop, 617542]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1]], [username2, userid2]] make sure you add me and Akir here, also use new format.
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
2/2, good job!
uhBella (1).gif
 

Yoko

I COULD BE BANNED!
QC 2.
:articuno:
[OVERVIEW]
Thanks to its amazing base 125 Special Defense stat and average base 90 HP stat, Articuno is very capable at being able to wall and stalling Pokemon like Shiftry and Audino, although its severly hindered down by its bad typing letting promient foes like Monferno, Zebstrika, and Rampardos break it, and its weakness to entry hazards limits it from switching in consistently. However with its ability, Pressure, as well as reliable recovery with Roost, Articuno can be a great defensive asset to teams if its provided with the proper support.

[SET]
Articuno @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
Happiness: 0
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Substitute
- Roost
- Ice Beam
- Toxic / Roar

[SET COMMENTS]
With maxed-out Special Defense this set focuses more on Articuno's bulk to stall out the opponent's team. Substitute prevents status from crippling Articuno and allows it to stall out super-effective low PP moves such as Head Smash, Stone Edge, and Close Combat give examples of what mons use these moves Arti stalls. Roost keeps Articuno's HP high to continuously make Substitutes and it can mitigate Stealth Rock damage. Ice Beam helps Articuno not be too passive, being able to threaten a OHKO on Torterra, Jumpluff, and Gabite, as well as threatening 2HKOes on foes like Shiftray, Maractus, Fraxure, and Marowak. Toxic can be useful to stall out most defensive Pokemon if ur your team does not provide Toxic Spikes support mention Toxic here from stuff like Bronzor here too., however its also a good option when paired with Toxic Spikes users like Tentacool and entry hazard users like Dwebble, Stunfisk, and Torterra. Roar is an alternative thats useful if you already have Toxic Spikes support or entry hazards in general, or value preventing set up sweepers like Shiftry, Ursaring, and Mawile. put a mention here for max Speed as an EV spread here here, its helpful to outrun the likes of Gabite, Monferno, Lux, etc but means you are a much more frail SpD wall.

Due to the tier's abundance of hazard setters which can hinder Articuno Pokemon like Natu and Rapid Spin users like Tentacool are very good teammates mention what Articuno does back for them here. Articuno's weakness to Fire-, Rock-, and Electric-type moves let it be broken down, making other defensive Pokemon like Frillish, Klang, and Stunfisk appreciated. In return, Articuno can help to wall Pokemon that threaten them like Shiftry, defensive Gabite, and Golduck. Due to not having any form of recovery, you have roost lmao. Articuno can appreciate Heal Bell and Wish users like Audino which can also help offset its Stealth Rock weakness.
[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Yokoisop, 617542]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1]], [username2, userid2]] make sure you add me and Akir here, also use new format.
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
2/2, good job!
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tysm owo:3 i forgot about articuno having roost AHH-
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TheRealBigC

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[OVERVIEW]
Thanks to its amazing base 125 Special Defense stat and average base 90 HP stat special bulk, Articuno is very capable at being able to wall walling and stalling Pokemon like Shiftry and Audino; (ASC) , (RC) although its however, it is severly severely hindered down by its bad typing that lets letting promient prominent foes like Monferno, Zebstrika, and Rampardos break it, and its weakness to entry hazards limits it from switching in consistently. However Nevertheless, with its ability, Pressure, as well as reliable recovery with Roost, Articuno can be a great defensive asset to teams if its it's provided with the proper support.

[SET]
Articuno @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
Happiness: 0 (is there a reason for this?)
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Substitute
- Roost
- Ice Beam
- Toxic / Roar

[SET COMMENTS]
With maxed-out maximum Special Defense, (AC) this set focuses more on Articuno's bulk to stall out the opponent's team. Substitute prevents status from crippling Articuno, (RC) and allows it to stall out super-effective threatening (changed because CC is not super effective on Articuno) low-PP (AH) moves such as Head Smash, Stone Edge, and Close Combat from users like Relicanth, Torterra, and Ursaring. Roost keeps Articuno's HP high to allow it to continuously make Substitutes, (AC) and it can mitigate Stealth Rock damage (can consider removing this sentence, as it's fairly obvious). Ice Beam helps Articuno not be too passive, being able to threaten a an OHKO on Torterra, Jumpluff, and Gabite, as well as threatening 2HKOes 2HKOs on foes like Shiftray Shiftry, Maractus, Fraxure, and Marowak. Toxic can be useful to stall out most defensive Pokemon if your team does not provide Toxic Spikes support; (ASC) , (RC) it can also be useful helpful (repetition) to spread Toxic in conjuction conjunction with Pokemon like Bronzor, and it can be a good option when paired with Toxic Spikes users like Tentacool (this is pretty contradictory to what was just said about Toxic being useful if your team does not have Toxic Spikes support? If Toxic is good regardless then why make why the initial point?) and entry hazard users setters like Dwebble, Stunfisk, and Torterra. Roar is an alternative thats that's useful if you already have entry hazard support, (RC) or and has value in preventing phazing set up set-up sweepers like Shiftry, Ursaring, and Mawile. Articuno can also use max Speed as an EV spread an EV spread with maximum Speed investment, which helps it to outspeed the likes of Gabite, Monferno, and Luxray; (ASC) , (RC) however, (AC) it leaves Articuno more frail to being damaged.

Due to the tier's abundance of entry hazard setters which that can hinder Articuno, (AC) Pokemon like Natu (Natu is the only Magic Bounce user in the tier) and Rapid Spin users like Tentacool are very good teammates. In return, Articuno can help wall their checks like Shiftry. Articuno's weakness to Fire-, Rock-, and Electric-type moves let it be broken down, making other defensive Pokemon that can cover these weaknesses like Frillish, Klang, and Stunfisk appreciated. In return, Articuno can help to wall Pokemon that threaten them like Shiftry, defensive Gabite, and Golduck. Articuno can appreciate Heal Bell and Wish users like Audino, (AC) which can also help offset its Stealth Rock weakness.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Yokoisop, 617542]]
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
-
Quality checked by: [[Akir, 231726]], [Bella, 567483]]
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/akir.231726/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/

- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
(Needs to be URL format to upload)
 
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Yoko

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[OVERVIEW]
Thanks to its amazing base 125 Special Defense stat and average base 90 HP stat special bulk, Articuno is very capable at being able to wall walling and stalling Pokemon like Shiftry and Audino; (ASC) , (RC) although its however, it is severly severely hindered down by its bad typing that lets letting promient prominent foes like Monferno, Zebstrika, and Rampardos break it, and its weakness to entry hazards limits it from switching in consistently. However Nevertheless, with its ability, Pressure, as well as reliable recovery with Roost, Articuno can be a great defensive asset to teams if its it's provided with the proper support.

[SET]
Articuno @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
Happiness: 0 (is there a reason for this?)
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Substitute
- Roost
- Ice Beam
- Toxic / Roar

[SET COMMENTS]
With maxed-out maximum Special Defense, (AC) this set focuses more on Articuno's bulk to stall out the opponent's team. Substitute prevents status from crippling Articuno, (RC) and allows it to stall out super-effective threatening (changed because CC is not super effective on Articuno) low-PP (AH) moves such as Head Smash, Stone Edge, and Close Combat from users like Relicanth, Torterra, and Ursaring. Roost keeps Articuno's HP high to allow it to continuously make Substitutes, (AC) and it can mitigate Stealth Rock damage (can consider removing this sentence, as it's fairly obvious). Ice Beam helps Articuno not be too passive, being able to threaten a an OHKO on Torterra, Jumpluff, and Gabite, as well as threatening 2HKOes 2HKOs on foes like Shiftray Shiftry, Maractus, Fraxure, and Marowak. Toxic can be useful to stall out most defensive Pokemon if your team does not provide Toxic Spikes support; (ASC) , (RC) it can also be useful helpful (repetition) to spread Toxic in conjuction conjunction with Pokemon like Bronzor, and it can be a good option when paired with Toxic Spikes users like Tentacool (this is pretty contradictory to what was just said about Toxic being useful if your team does not have Toxic Spikes support? If Toxic is good regardless then why make why the initial point?) and entry hazard users setters like Dwebble, Stunfisk, and Torterra. Roar is an alternative thats that's useful if you already have entry hazard support, (RC) or and has value in preventing phazing set up set-up sweepers like Shiftry, Ursaring, and Mawile. Articuno can also use max Speed as an EV spread an EV spread with maximum Speed investment, which helps it to outspeed the likes of Gabite, Monferno, and Luxray; (ASC) , (RC) however, (AC) it leaves Articuno more frail to being damaged.

Due to the tier's abundance of entry hazard setters which that can hinder Articuno, (AC) Pokemon like Natu (Natu is the only Magic Bounce user in the tier) and Rapid Spin users like Tentacool are very good teammates. In return, Articuno can help wall their checks like Shiftry. Articuno's weakness to Fire-, Rock-, and Electric-type moves let it be broken down, making other defensive Pokemon who can cover these weaknesses like Frillish, Klang, and Stunfisk appreciated. In return, Articuno can help to wall Pokemon that threaten them like Shiftry, defensive Gabite, and Golduck. Articuno can appreciate Heal Bell and Wish users like Audino, (AC) which can also help offset its Stealth Rock weakness.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Yokoisop, 617542]]
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
-
Quality checked by: [[Akir, 231726]], [Bella, 567483]]
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/akir.231726/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/

- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
(Needs to be URL format to upload)
implemented ty:!!
 
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[OVERVIEW]
Thanks to its amazing special bulk, Articuno is very capable at of walling and stalling Pokemon like Shiftry and Audino; howver however, it is severely hindered by its bad typing that lets prominent foes like Monferno, Zebstrika, and Rampardos break it, and its weakness to entry hazards limits it from switching in consistently. Nevertheless, (comma) with its ability, Pressure, as well as reliable recovery with in Roost, Articuno can be a great defensive asset to teams if it's provided with the proper support. (what kind of support?)

[SET]
Articuno @ Leftovers (don't forget to add the set name)
Ability: Pressure
Happiness: 0 (is there an actual reason this is set to 0? if there is, maybe it's worth explaining, but if it's just for cosmetic purposes, remove it)
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Substitute
- Roost
- Ice Beam
- Toxic / Roar

[SET COMMENTS]
With maximum Special Defense, this set focuses on using Articuno's bulk to stall out the opponent's team. Substitute prevents status from crippling Articuno; (semicolon) and allows it to stall out threatening low-PP moves such as Head Smash, Stone Edge, and Close Combat from users like Relicanth, Torterra, and Ursaring. Ice Beam helps Articuno not be too passive, being able to threaten threatening an OHKO on Torterra, Jumpluff, and Gabite, as well as 2HKOs on foes like Shiftry, Maractus, Fraxure, and Marowak. Toxic can be useful to stall out most defensive Pokemon if your Articuno's team does not provide Toxic Spikes support; (double space) it can also be helpful to spread Toxic poison in conjunction with Pokemon like Bronzor, (comma) and it can be a good option when paired with entry hazard setters like Dwebble, Stunfisk, and Torterra. Roar is an alternative that's useful if you have Articuno has entry hazard support and has value in phazing set-up setup sweepers like Shiftry, Ursaring, and Mawile. Articuno can also alternatively use an EV spread with maximum Speed investment, which helps to lets it (as there's nothing else boosting its Speed) outspeed the likes of Gabite, Monferno, and Luxray; however, it leaves Articuno this leaves it more frail.

Due to the tier's abundance of entry hazard setters that can hinder Articuno, Natu and Rapid Spin users like Tentacool are very good teammates. In return, Articuno can help wall their checks like Shiftry. Articuno's weakness weaknesses to Fire-, Rock-, and Electric-type moves let it be broken down (by what?), making other defensive Pokemon who that can cover these weaknesses like Frillish, Klang, and Stunfisk appreciated. In return, Articuno can help to wall Pokemon that threaten them like Shiftry, defensive Gabite, and Golduck. Articuno can appreciate appreciates Heal Bell and Wish users like Audino, which can also help offset its Stealth Rock weakness.

[CREDITS] (make sure to remove the dashes)
-
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
- Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/akir.231726/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/
- Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/therealbigc.532450/

- Something is "capable of" doing something, not "capable at" doing something.
- Make sure sets have a set name included.
- The phrase "this set focuses on Articuno's bulk to..." needs "using" before "Articuno".
- I replaced the "you have" in "if you have entry hazard support" with "Articuno has", as the hazards are supporting your Pokemon, not you.
- When used as part of a compound noun (e.g., "setup sweeper"), it's "setup" and not "set-up".
- The sentence about Articuno's weaknesses includes "let", which should be used with the plural "weaknesses" rather than "weakness".
- The lines in the credits shouldn't have dashes before them.

1/1 GP Team done
Credit TheRealBigC too!
 

Yoko

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[OVERVIEW]
Thanks to its amazing special bulk, Articuno is very capable at of walling and stalling Pokemon like Shiftry and Audino; howver however, it is severely hindered by its bad typing that lets prominent foes like Monferno, Zebstrika, and Rampardos break it, and its weakness to entry hazards limits it from switching in consistently. Nevertheless, (comma) with its ability, Pressure, as well as reliable recovery with in Roost, Articuno can be a great defensive asset to teams if it's provided with the proper support. (what kind of support?)

[SET]
Articuno @ Leftovers (don't forget to add the set name)
Ability: Pressure
Happiness: 0 (is there an actual reason this is set to 0? if there is, maybe it's worth explaining, but if it's just for cosmetic purposes, remove it)
EVs: 248 HP / 8 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Substitute
- Roost
- Ice Beam
- Toxic / Roar

[SET COMMENTS]
With maximum Special Defense, this set focuses on using Articuno's bulk to stall out the opponent's team. Substitute prevents status from crippling Articuno; (semicolon) and allows it to stall out threatening low-PP moves such as Head Smash, Stone Edge, and Close Combat from users like Relicanth, Torterra, and Ursaring. Ice Beam helps Articuno not be too passive, being able to threaten threatening an OHKO on Torterra, Jumpluff, and Gabite, as well as 2HKOs on foes like Shiftry, Maractus, Fraxure, and Marowak. Toxic can be useful to stall out most defensive Pokemon if your Articuno's team does not provide Toxic Spikes support; (double space) it can also be helpful to spread Toxic poison in conjunction with Pokemon like Bronzor, (comma) and it can be a good option when paired with entry hazard setters like Dwebble, Stunfisk, and Torterra. Roar is an alternative that's useful if you have Articuno has entry hazard support and has value in phazing set-up setup sweepers like Shiftry, Ursaring, and Mawile. Articuno can also alternatively use an EV spread with maximum Speed investment, which helps to lets it (as there's nothing else boosting its Speed) outspeed the likes of Gabite, Monferno, and Luxray; however, it leaves Articuno this leaves it more frail.

Due to the tier's abundance of entry hazard setters that can hinder Articuno, Natu and Rapid Spin users like Tentacool are very good teammates. In return, Articuno can help wall their checks like Shiftry. Articuno's weakness weaknesses to Fire-, Rock-, and Electric-type moves let it be broken down (by what?), making other defensive Pokemon who that can cover these weaknesses like Frillish, Klang, and Stunfisk appreciated. In return, Articuno can help to wall Pokemon that threaten them like Shiftry, defensive Gabite, and Golduck. Articuno can appreciate appreciates Heal Bell and Wish users like Audino, which can also help offset its Stealth Rock weakness.

[CREDITS] (make sure to remove the dashes)
-
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
- Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/akir.231726/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bella.567483/
- Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/therealbigc.532450/

- Something is "capable of" doing something, not "capable at" doing something.
- Make sure sets have a set name included.
- The phrase "this set focuses on Articuno's bulk to..." needs "using" before "Articuno".
- I replaced the "you have" in "if you have entry hazard support" with "Articuno has", as the hazards are supporting your Pokemon, not you.
- When used as part of a compound noun (e.g., "setup sweeper"), it's "setup" and not "set-up".
- The sentence about Articuno's weaknesses includes "let", which should be used with the plural "weaknesses" rather than "weakness".
- The lines in the credits shouldn't have dashes before them.

1/1 GP Team done
Credit TheRealBigC too!
implemented tysm
assuming only one gp check is enough for this analysis (if not please correct me:!)
so ready for upload i think
 

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