CaP Prevos - Voodoll - Part 6 - PokeDex Submissions

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DHR-107

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Hey all, apologies for the delay, but we needed to work out some kinks before we could reach this point!

Voodoom only had one dex entry back in the day:
"VOODOOM has stuck a pin in its heart to make sure it never feels anything but pain again. It is said that its true potential is only unlocked when it feels loved enough to take the pin out."
This is incredibly long for a Diamond/Pearl/Plat dex entry, so let's see if we can chop that down by about half for Voodoll. It is also fairly dark, but dark entries are not unheard of. Let's try and keep Voodoll's in the same vein...

Can you please also submit a height and weight to give me an idea of where you guys think we should be for those stats!

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Pokedex entries Final Submissions must posted exactly in the following format and in the following exact order:
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  • A blank line
  • "<Pokemon Name>, the <Species Name> Pokemon", with the Pokemon name and the Species Name in bold
  • A blank line
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  • A blank line
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Below the Final Submission you can post other comments, explanations, etc.

Example final submission:

Final Submission

Skorupi, the Scorpion Pokémon

Diamond: It grips prey with its tail claws and injects poison. It tenaciously hangs on until the poison takes.

Pearl: It lives in arid lands. It buries utself in sand and lies in wait for unsuspecting prey.

Platinum: As soon as the tail claws close, its needle tips secrete poison. It can survive a year without food.
Any Final Submission that does not follow the proper format will be disqualified.

Have fun!
 
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Voodoll
, the Voodoo doll pokemon

Diamond: Ever since it was born, it felt nothing but pain. Pins pierced its insides, paralyzing it with pain for its first days alive.

Pearl: VOODOLL constantly thinks about the day it would stop feeling pain. It tends to stick its needles in electrical circuits.

Platinum: VOODOLL is an expensive, yet illegal stress toy in the occult society. People pierce needles inside them to soothe anger, watching VOODOLL writhe is calming.
 
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G-Luke

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Final Submission

Voodoll, the Voodoo Pokémon

Diamond: VOODOLL endures constant punishment without complaint, plotting to release all its sufferation on foes onces its evolves...

Pearl: With the ability to harness electricity, VOODOLL uses it as a means of pain alleviation.

Platinum: It has several pins stuck in its body. Legend has it that if one pierces its skin with one, it feels all the pain Voodoll has endured.


So for each entry, I tackled one aspect of Voodoll, with pain being the central theme for them all.
 
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Final Submission

Voodoll, the Plush Doll Pokémon.

Diamond: It takes repeated beatings daily. Despite rumored cries for revenge, it's never willing to go through with it.

Pearl: VOODOLL is said to evolve as a result of a ritual in which a needle placed in its heart is struck by lightning.

Platinum: The scope of its sensory is limited to just its heart. The limbs punctured by pins move more easily.
 
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G-Luke

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Final Submission

Voodoll, the Plush Doll Pokémon.

Diamond: It is repeatedly beaten up daily. Despite rumored cries for revenge, it isn't reported to go through with it.

Pearl: VOODOLL is said to evolve as a result of a ritual in which a needle placed in its heart is struck by lightning.

Platinum: The scope of its sensory is limited to just its heart. The limbs punctured by pins move more easily.
Someone didnt read the rules.
 

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Final Submission

Voodoll
, the Limp Doll Pokémon

Diamond: VOODOLL cannot move at all, so it is forced to defend itself from a distance with ear-splitting screams.

Pearl: It is said that VOODOLL is the remnant of a witch's voodoo magic. It harbors the memories of the victim it possessed.

Platinum: VOODOLL no longer feels pain from the pins stuck in its body. Instead, it screams hysterically when someone attempts to remove them.
 
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Voodoll
, the Pain Pokémon

Diamond: This Pokémon feels constant pain and suffering from needles in its body. Screams of pain can be heard from inside it.

Pearl: VOODOLL was created through an ancient black magic. It uses this black magic to defend itself from attackers.

Platinum: It has numerous pins pierced in its body. Each pin is said to contain the combined pain of innocent souls.
 
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Final submission

Voodoll
, the Voodoo doll pokemon

Diamond: Ever since it was born, it felt nothing but pain. Pins pierced its insides, paralyzing it with pain for its first days alive.

Pearl: VOODOLL constantly dreams about the day it would die. It seeks that answer in harsh thunder storms.

Platinum: VOODOLL is an expensive, yet illegal stress toy in society. People pierce needles inside them to soothe anger, A VOODOLL's squirm is calming.
 
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Final Submission

Voodoll,
the Doll pokemon

Diamond: This pokemon has endured so much pain, that all there is left inside its head is one single, echoing thought: revenge.

Pearl: A common sight on the black market, these pokemon are sold illegally as stress toys. There unchanging expressions and lack of movement give the illusion of them not sensing pain.

Platinum: Left with nothing but pain, VOODOLL is waiting for the day when that special spark will ignite the fighting spirit lying dormant within it.
 
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DHR-107

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I will try and get this sorted out at lunch time today which gives you guys about 4 hours to make sure you're all legal and ready to go.
 
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