CaP Prevos - Privatyke - Part 6 - PokeDex Submissions

DHR-107

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Hi All!

Let's get Privatyke finished up with its last two threads! These will be open for a few days from now (probably a bit longer for the Sprite thread). We recently gave Argonaut a few brand new Dex entries!

Arghonaut, the Pirate Pokémon

Diamond: Hearty and boisterous, ARGHONAUT are known to take over opposing ships and crews for entertainment.

Pearl: ARGHONAUT are very efficient sea captains, commanding crews of both Pokémon and people alike.

Platinum: ARGHONAUT are a bit egotistical due to their success as captains, and from the vast number of PRIVATYKE that aspire to be them.
Please use these as your basis for your new dex entries for Privatyke!

Can you please also submit a height and weight to give me an idea of where you guys think we should be for those stats!

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Legal Pokedex submissions must meet the following standards
  • Pokedex Entries must have flawless grammar. Smogon has a Grammar & Prose team that will help identify mistakes.
  • Pokedex Entries cannot be longer than 25 words.
  • Pokedex Entries can only contain the following characters:
    • Letters A-Z
    • Numbers 0-9
    • Dash (-)
    • Apostrophe (')
    • Period (.)
    • Comma (,)
    • Colon (:)
    • Semi-colon (;)
    • Space

Work In Progress (WIP) Pokedex Entries can be posted at any time for comments from the community.

No more than three WIP Pokedex Entries can be posted by any individual person through the entire course of the submission thread. This limit applies to ALL posts made by a single person, even if previous posts are edited or deleted. This limit is intended to curb the tendency for some submitters to spam the thread repeatedly with multiple Pokedex Entries. This detracts from other submissions and makes it difficult for commenters to survey the submission thread.

Do not bump your WIP Pokedex Entries by posting them repeatedly, or making minor wording changes. Bumping will result in the disqualification of all Pokedex Entries by the offender. Editing or deleting bump posts will not prevent disqualification.

Only ONE Final Submission can be made per person.

Pokedex Entry Final Submissions can only be posted after a CAP Moderator posts in the thread that final submissions are open. Any final submission posted prior to the Moderator notification post, will disqualify the submitter from the poll entirely. Even if the offending post is edited later or deleted, the submitter will still be disqualified for the remainder of the thread. This ensures that all submitters have equal opportunity to post final submissions without anyone unfairly "jumping the gun".

Pokedex entries Final Submissions must posted exactly in the following format and in the following exact order:
  • The first line of the post must have the words "Final Submission" in bold on it's own line. No other text may be included before the bold heading.
  • A blank line
  • "<Pokemon Name>, the <Species Name> Pokemon", with the Pokemon name and the Species Name in bold
  • A blank line
  • The Diamond Pokedex Entry submission. Start with the word "Diamond" in bold, then a colon (:), and then the Pokedex entry.
  • A blank line
  • The Pearl Pokedex Entry submission. Start with the word "Pearl" in bold, then a colon (:), and then the Pokedex entry.
  • A blank line
  • The Platinum Pokedex Entry Submission. Start with the word "Platinum" in bold, then a colol (:), and then the Pokedex entry.
Below the Final Submission you can post other comments, explanations, etc.

Example final submission:

Final Submission

Skorupi, the Scorpion Pokémon

Diamond: It grips prey with its tail claws and injects poison. It tenaciously hangs on until the poison takes.

Pearl: It lives in arid lands. It buries utself in sand and lies in wait for unsuspecting prey.

Platinum: As soon as the tail claws close, its needle tips secrete poison. It can survive a year without food.
Any Final Submission that does not follow the proper format will be disqualified.

Have fun!

Our Prevo so far:

Name:
Privatyke

Typing: Water/Fighting
Abilities: Unaware/Technician
Stats: HP 65 / Atk 75 / Def 65 / SpA 40 / SpD 60 / Spe 45 / BST 350 (-40 HP) (-35 Atk) (-30 Def) (-30 SpA) (-40 SpD) (-30 Spe) (-205 BST)
Movepool: http://www.smogon.com/forums/thread...-5-movepool-submissions.3606611/#post-7401945
 
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Final Submission

Height: 1.0m/3'03"
Weight: 57.3kg/126.3lb

Privatyke, the Pirate Pokémon

Diamond: Its lifestyle is about taking orders and carrying them out. It's a clumsy Pokémon, so mistakes are frequent.

Pearl: It is said that millennia ago, PRIVATYKE ascended from the sea to sail on WAILORD. Nowadays, they make their own means of sea travel.

Platinum: If two crews of PRIVATYKE meet, they get in a fight. The winner of the fight takes the other's treasure hoard.
 
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Final Submission

Height: 1.0m/39''
Weight: 18kg/40lbs

Privatyke, the Cabin Boy Pokémon

Diamond: PRIVATYKE yearn to evolve into ARGHONAUT. They complete orders accurately in a timely fashion, and they do hard labor to receive recognition.

Pearl: One can always find PRIVATYKE surrounding a battle of ARGHONAUT. Each crew of PRIVATYKE stands at attention in hopes to learn.

Platinum: PRIVATYKE value loyalty but follow power. If an ARGHONAUT loses a battle with another, the PRIVATYKE of the losing captain join the other crew.
 

LucarioOfLegends

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Final Submission

Height: 1.0m/3' 3" (pretty much agree with the other submitters here)
Weight: 33.1kg/73lbs (seems about right considering snor's estimation and Privatyke's chubbiness)

Privatyke, the Sea Squid Pokémon

Diamond: Loyal and hardworking, PRIVATYKE work on the ships of sailors across the sea with the hope of one day commanding a vessel themselves.

Pearl: This Pokémon thrives best at sea. It can use its tremendous strength to move heavy cargo onto boats.

Platinum: They secretly hoard away their earnings as crewmen on ships. They become more greedy and demanding when close to evolving.
 
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Final Submission

Privatyke
, the Boatswain Pokemon

Height: 2'04'' / 0.7 m (the height of Quilladin and Toxapex)
Weight: 140 lbs / 63.5 lbs (the approximate weight of Arghonaut, if it was scaled down to Privatyke's height)

Diamond: While sailing at sea, PRIVATYKE frequently uses its sharp metal blade to catch FINNEON as food for other PRIVATYKE.

Pearl: Led by an ARGHONAUT, hordes of PRIVATYKE regularly plunder massive cargo ships, leaving many businesses out of stock.

Platnium: Without an ARGHONAUT as a captain, PRIVATYKE violently brawl with each other for the ownership of any loot they find.
 
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Final Submission

Privatyke,
the Matey Pokemon

Height: 1.0m/ 3'3"
Weight: 20.0kg/ 44 lbs

Diamond: If a PRIVATYKE is assigned a task by the captain ARGHONAUT, it will do it without hesitation as a sign of admiration towards its captain.

Pearl: PRIVATYKE spend their early years learning to catch food using their metal blade. They're commonly seen hunting near shores, perhaps looking for a captain.

Platinum: PRIVATYKE don't get along well with each other due to each wanting more praise from the ARGHONAUT that leads them than the other.
 

G-Luke

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Final Submission

Height: 1.0m / 3'3"
Weight: 37.4 kg / 82.5

Privatyke, the Squidling Pokémon

Diamond: PRIVATYKE have not quite gained their sea legs. As a result, they are often seen waddling about with a slight daze on the high seas.

Pearl: PRIVATYKE are diligent workers that never fail at carrying out the commands of the ARGHONAUT captain they aspire to be.

Platinum: Quite skilled with their metal blades, PRIVATYKE are often seen hunting MAGIKARP and even fearsome CARVANHA.

In the making of these dex entries, I decided to dedicate each entry on a different aspect of Privatyke. First one teases unaware behaviour. Second highlights its dedication the their Arghonaut captain and the last showcases it using its metal claw
 
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DHR-107

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Cool stuff so far guys! You've got about another 24 hours or so! Let's get this all sorted!
 

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