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What age group do you teach Chou? I currently teach Junior High and they're amusing. Was walking around school and one student asked me to play tennis with them. I said no and he shouts back 'Come on baby!'.

I wouldn't worry too much about self discipline unless you're in college/university. Once you're working on something you enjoy or you realize that you actually need to work hard, it will hopefully kick in. Being responsible for something that affects other people can also help. Like something...

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Staraptor is now banned, need to remove mention of it from the overview and the AC for the NP Set. You also use the word 'underhand' in the overview which doesn't mean 'negative' or 'opposite' like how you use it. Underhand would be more sneaky. You could just change it to 'On the other hand'...

Some spacing errors and you left in aprt of the GP check under OO. I also changed a comma to a semi colon in the same paragraph. I bolded an incorrect sentence under 'Checks and Counters', you may want to reword that. Also saying something is dreadfully weak to Stealth Rock makes it sound like...

Just a heads up, Aron is Rock/Steel and thus only 2x resists Rock.

2nd paragraph under AC on all sets is missing the <p> tag. Also any reason why they're almost exactly the same? It's weird reading the almost exact same thing 3 times, wouldn't hurt to try to mix it up a little bit. AC under the SD set, left in a part of the last GP check and you need to...

Insert an 'a' in the overview.

AC under the trick room set, remove 'but'. Although if you might want to just reword it to something like 'without the ability to heal itself since it lacks Drain Punch', since you use despite again the next sentence.

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Thanks, I am just bored though.

In the first set you have Flash Cannon as a primary slash, however you actually write more about Magnet Rise which is the option for Flash Cannon. Possibly change the order of the slashes or adjust your wording there. Change first to second.

Return is the primary option in the above set, you should be mentioning that Double Edge is an option for extra power at the cost of recoil. Unless of course you decide to make Double Edge the primary option in the set, but that's for QC and you to decide. Also insert space.

This sentence doesn't read right to me. Maybe change it to something like 'The EVs are there to maximise its Speed and Attack with the remainder going to HP and Defense to add a little bulk', although this may be a personal thing. Also there's a red comma in the 'Checks and Counters' section...

Insert hyphen since 'switch-in' is being used as a noun here under set comments for the CB set. Insert full stop/period and resist->resists under AC for the stallbreaker set. In this sentence you would need to switch 'Donphan and Slowbro', or switch 'Psychic or Stone Edge/Ice Shard'...

Insert 'of' in the second paragraph of the first set.

Insert full stop/period. Insert space. Also you kept the blue colour from the previous GP check at times throughout the analysis.

Minor nit picks, hit-work since it's not an attack. Also I bolded a sentence that just doesn't seem to read right to me. A tangent is an unrelated point, I would use 'in conjunction' instead. In your overview you mention how it 'can pull off a pretty effective stall set', then go on to say how...

[SET COMMENTS] <p>With Substitute in its moveset, Raikou can attempt to set up multiple Calm Minds to amass a huge Special Attack stat. Thunderbolt and Hidden Power Ice together hit everything in the tier neutrally bar Lanturn, Magneton, Rotom-H, Rotom-F and Shedinja. Aura Sphere is an...

In the Set Comments you mention how Gligar is taken care of with HP Ice and then 2 sentences later you say the same thing again just adding in how it takes care for Grass-Types too.