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By the way, are you ok with using voice chat through discord to talk? I don't know if it was because you were distracted or just because you're slow to type but I think maybe it'd go more smoothly that way.
I created this pastebin as I've made a couple of changes that I wanted your opinion on. I've put HP Ground on CharY as I noticed Heatran becoming a problem.
Tbolt on Lele was a judgement I got after reading the analysis. I don't really expect to click it much. I also put knock off on Ferrothorn but I'm not sure that should stay. Aegislash is an issue and I'm wondering if Dark Pulse need to be fitted on Gren.